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1.在台灣,超過30歲的女性有很大百分比仍保持單身。
解答:In Taiwan,a large percentage of womenover 30 remain single
我寫:In Taiwan,over thirty year-old femaleshave a lot of percentage still keeping single.
請問此題我這樣寫對嗎?不對的話犯了哪些文法問題
你用了中文語法來寫英文,把中文的[有]翻成了have,其實這裡中文的[有]是指一種存在的狀況(there are/is ....)。
中文英譯時,要考慮邏輯上的關係,本句中文原文的基本資訊是[婦女保持單身的比率很高]。你可以選[保持]或[是]來當主要動詞。參考句用了remain是比較精簡的寫法。
2.他們因為經濟獨立而不想結婚。
解答:They did not want to get married because they are financially independent.
此題最後用”because financial independence” 可以嗎?
because是連接詞,應帶出副詞子句。
because of才能接名詞:...because of their financial independence.才是正確的寫法。
3.今年夏天很熱;每天氣溫幾乎都超過36℃。
解答:It was very hot this summer;the temperature was almost over 36℃ every day.
我寫:This summer is very hot;the temperature almost over 36℃ every day.
可以這樣寫嗎?還有為何要分號?分號後面要寫大寫還是小寫?
分號表示對等句,前後的子句裡的資訊同樣重要。
July will be devoted to writing; August, to revision.(用逗號表示重複的部分省略了。你的兩個子句在內容的對應上是不平行對稱的(summer<>temperature),不能省略動詞。
4.為了避免中暑,我們盡可能待在室內。
解答:To avoid sunstroke, we stay indoors as much as possible.
為何”indoors”最後要加s? 不能”indoor”嗎? 最後用”as possible as wecan”可以嗎?
indoors是副詞(在室內),indoor是形容詞(室內的),用在名詞之前,本句應用副詞來修飾stay。因為是指可能性越高越好,所以用as much as來表示量要大,如果用as possible as we can可能不符英語語法,因為只有if possible及as ... as possible兩種講法。
5.很多學生日夜唸書,一點都不運動。
解答:Many students study day and night, taking no exercise at all/not exercising at all.
請問最後可以用”…. ,and not exercise at all”嗎?
不行,需要刪去逗號,並加上助動詞do:... and do not exercise at all.
6.這樣將對他們的健康造成傷害,且無助於他們的學業成績。
解答:It will damage to their health and do not good to their grades.
解答有誤,可能需改成:It will damage their health and will not do any good to their grades.
我寫:This will harm their health, and can nothelp their grades.
這樣寫可以嗎? 還有and前面到底要不要加逗號??
基本上and是用來連接在時間上一先一後或同時的資訊,但本你造的句子前面是未來,後面是現在,在時序邏輯上不通。此外,用and連結兩個述部時,通常是不能加逗號的。
7.規律的運動和充足的睡眠對青少年有益
解答:Regular exercise and enough sleep benefit to teenagers.
寫full sleep可以嗎?
英文字有習慣的組合方式,但我沒看到full sleep的說法。
8.但有些人常熬夜上網,白天上課時就打瞌睡。
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